Tuesday, 4 August 2015

SILK PURSE INDEED... Oiwona Andrew and his Poetry




By Seun Ajijala

A chartered accountant, Oiwona Andrew, is a stammerer. This is definitely not a trait that anybody wants to flaunt in the public. What with the stigmatisation that those who stutter suffer, especially in the hands of comedians who mock them in wicked jokes.

But for Andrew, a creative person should be able to turn an ugly experience into something meaningful. As a result, his first collection of poems, entitled Heavy Tongue, is built around his experience as a stammerer. The collection of 19 poems is something that really gladdens his heart.

He says, Heavy Tongue is an imagery of someone who stammers. The title was taken from my personal life as someone with a stuttering tongue. This actually happened as a result of heredity. Nobody has control over the circumstances surrounding his birth. Therefore, whatever life throws at one, one can handle confidently with faith.”

Prof. Olusesan Oliyide of the Faculty of Law, Olabisi Onabanjo University, Ago-Iwoye, also in the foreword to the book, notes that the poet has an exceptional talent, saying the gift compensates for his being slow in speech.

Oliyide adds, Heavy Tongue covers and touches several areas like one’s personal experience, women, traffic jam, elegy, nature, apartheid and religion. This makes the targeted audience for the book to be large. The poem, Mandela, is suitable for international journals and worthy of international recognition. In that poem, he dwells on racial discrimination which Mandela fought and won in South Africa.”

The title poem, Heavy Tongue, is a nine-stanza piece that bemoans the inconveniences of being a stammerer. Featuring paradoxical statements, among other devices, the poem paints the picture of the problems a stammerer faces.

The hidden part of her candidly talks about the struggle of an impotent man in intercourse, thoroughly describing the privates of a lady and making use of imagery, rhetoric, similes and metaphors.

Woman’s Chapters describes the phases of a woman’s physical and mental development from adolescence to adulthood. This poem richly employs rhyme, imagery and pun, which make it very humorous.

On the whole, Heavy Tongue is an inspiring collection. However, the image of the tongue on the cover of the book seems unnecessary, as it can affect the maturity of the work. Besides, the description of sexual organs in The Hidden Part appears to be too overt.
·        * Courtesy, PUNCH

35 comments:

  1. lovely pls can you try and describe the poem ,money by oiwona andrew

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  2. Can someone help me with the poetic Analysis of money by Oiwona Andrew

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    1. please i need the poem nightfall by oiwana andrew

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    2. Pls get the poem 🌃 fall

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  3. Pls we need the poem of money by Oiwona Andrew

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  4. Pls we need the poem of money by Oiwona Andrew

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  5. ya what unknown said on 9 59 4 june 2020

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  6. Please what about night fall

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  7. Analysis of "Money" and "Nightfall" by Oiwona Andrew please

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  8. I NEED THE SUMMARY OF THE POEM MONEY BY OIWONA ANDREW

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    1. I NEED THE MOTAL LESSONS OF THE POEM MONEY BY OIWONA ANDREW

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  9. I can give y'all the poem Money and the analysis:

    Too much of everything is bad
    Money is everything
    So is too much of money bad?
    You have all the money
    5. You have all the honey


    You are a paper that smells
    And make men to smile
    A light paper that makes men heavy
    When they have bundles


    10. You are a rectangle
    That makes men to rest at all angles
    A paper with a seal
    That men steal with zeal


    Money makes a man first
    15. And his opinions seconded
    A paper that makes men right
    Even when they are wrong


    Money has no mouth
    Yet it speaks your language
    20. You have money
    You have money
    The affluent feel insecure
    A disease difficult to cure
    Running helter-skelter
    25. From their shelter
    At the slighted short
    It is not whether you have money
    It is whether you don’t have mourning
    Because you have money…


    Background/Setting of the poem
    Because the poet Andrew Oiwona is a Nigerian, one can
    conclude that this poem is all about the situation of things
    in his homestead – Nigeria. There is no misgiving that
    money dictates the tune in Nigeria. Money seems to be a
    little god that people worship. It is in Nigeria that people
    worship, adore and are passionate about money and
    riches. They pay homage to anyone who is living in
    affluence not minding how he/she came across such a
    wealth. It is against this that poet presents his poem –
    money:
    Money makes a man first


    And his opinions seconded


    Summary/Analysis
    Lines 1-5
    The poet draws the curtain of his poem by presenting his
    thoughts on people’s notions on money. According to
    average men on the street, money is everything. “He who
    says money cannot buy your joy does not know where to
    shop for it”, says a notable writer. With this in mind, the
    poet persona concludes that anyone who is rich or
    wealthy possesses all goodies of life:
    You have all the money
    You have all the honey


    “Honey” here means joy, happiness, pleasure and
    gladness.


    Lines 6-9
    Here the poet persona is showering encomium on money.
    He describes money as a paper that smells yet it makes
    people smile, happy, cheerful and delighted. He further
    portrays money as a light printed paper that makes owners


    to feel heavy, important, pompous, arrogant and self-
    important.


    Lines 10-13
    Another description of money the poet persona made is
    that it is a rectangular shape item which men possess and
    makes them control all the angles – worldwide. He ends it
    that money is a worldly item that all and sundry are eager
    to possess even to the level of taking more than what they
    need:
    A paper with a seal
    That men steal with zeal


    Lines 14-17
    Here, the poet persona describes money as an item that
    brings men to the forefront and upper in the societal
    ladder even if such a person lacks intellect, brain power
    and mental power. He further clarifies that according to
    the societal judgement of money, money makes owners to
    be right at all times even when he/she is wrong and guilty:
    A paper that makes men right
    Even when they are more wrong


    Lines 18-26
    The poem speaker here describes money as a
    phenomenon that has no mouth, but speaks all languages.
    What he is driving at here is that money is the
    determining factors world over. In line 22, he makes it
    clearer that zeal to acquire riches is what makes all and
    sundry to feel insecure, hence they are running helter-
    skelter, struggling and crossing hurdles and toiling to
    amass wealth. This and others may be what that great
    philosopher, Sophocles had in mind when she said:
    “There’s nothing in the world so demoralizing as money”.


    Lines 27-29
    These last three lines conclude the entire poem. The
    portion of the poem could mean what Voltaire, a Greek
    writer meant when he said: “Don’t think money does
    everything or you are going to end up doing everything
    for money”. To cut it short, it is not money that matters
    but peace of mind. Hence the poet speaker says:
    It is not whether you have money
    It is whether you don’t have mourning

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    1. God bless you for taking the time to write this.

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    2. Please what's the mood and tone of this poem.
      2) the stanzaic arrangements
      3) the ryhme scheme

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  10. Here's Nightfall with the analysis:

    Night is not like daytime
    When the sun rises
    Night falls

    Night is not like day that is hot
    Night is nippy
    And makes man sleepy

    Night is not like the day that is bright
    Night is dull
    And cannot read and write

    Night is not like the day when people work
    Night is when people sleep to wake
    Night is not the time for loud lullaby
    Night is the time for lull

    Night is not like the day
    That is pure and holy
    Night is diabolic
    And makes friends fiends

    Night is not like the day
    When people wake as if they will die
    Night is when people sleep
    As if they were dead

    Night is not when people pursue dreams
    Night is when people dream dreams
    Night is not when people gather
    Night is when we dark weather

    Night alias dusk
    Like the wind blows with dusts
    To cover the eyes of men
    So they cannot see

    As night falls
    We all fall
    Asleep
    Making sleep the order of the day...


    BACKGROUND/SUMMARY OF THE POEM
    This poem "Nightfall" could be seen from two different angles. One, this could be a poem of contrast between daytime and night time, hours of daylight and that of night. Two, it could also be seen as a comparison between a period men are strong, agile and active with that of a period when they are old, aged and finally transited to death. Whatever may be the case, there is a daytime as well as night time. There is a wide gap between these two movements in time. The activities in these two periods are also not the same.


    (THIS IS IT. FORGIVE ME IF SOME ARE SPELT WRONG)

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  11. Please I need the tone of the poem money

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  13. Please,what about nightfall 🌃

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  14. Please I need a discussion of the following themes in Nightfall by Oiwona Andrew:
    1) The good and evil characteristics of night.
    2) Nightfall shows that life is a continuum.
    3) Nightfall brings almost all human activities to an end.
    Thanks.

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  15. Thanks so much for the poem on money have been looking for it for some time now

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  16. Please help me pick out figures of speech and their lines

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    1. Please can I see some poetic devices and the mood and tone of the poem

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  17. Pls can you explain the theme of money conquers all barriers

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  18. Literary devices used in the poem"Money by Oiwona Andrew

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  19. Pls the themes of wailing man by Oiwona Andrew

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  20. Pls I need the themes of the poem uwu

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  21. Please I need the poem Heavy Tongue by Oiwana Andrew, it is urgent. Also, if possible, help me with the analysis.

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  22. Please I need the figures of speech of nightfall

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  23. Pls I need the poem title heavy tongue
    It's very urgent

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