By Seun Ajijala
A chartered
accountant, Oiwona Andrew, is a stammerer. This is definitely not a trait that
anybody wants to flaunt in the public. What with the stigmatisation that those
who stutter suffer, especially in the hands of comedians who mock them in
wicked jokes.
But for Andrew, a
creative person should be able to turn an ugly experience into something
meaningful. As a result, his first collection of poems, entitled Heavy Tongue, is built around his
experience as a stammerer. The collection of 19 poems is something that really
gladdens his heart.
He says, Heavy Tongue is an imagery of someone
who stammers. The title was taken from my personal life as someone with a
stuttering tongue. This actually happened as a result of heredity. Nobody has
control over the circumstances surrounding his birth. Therefore, whatever life
throws at one, one can handle confidently with faith.”
Prof. Olusesan
Oliyide of the Faculty of Law, Olabisi Onabanjo University, Ago-Iwoye, also in
the foreword to the book, notes that the poet has an exceptional talent, saying
the gift compensates for his being slow in speech.
Oliyide adds, Heavy Tongue covers and touches several
areas like one’s personal experience, women, traffic jam, elegy, nature,
apartheid and religion. This makes the targeted audience for the book to be
large. The poem, Mandela, is
suitable for international journals and worthy of international recognition. In
that poem, he dwells on racial discrimination which Mandela fought and won in
South Africa.”
The title poem, Heavy Tongue, is a nine-stanza piece
that bemoans the inconveniences of being a stammerer. Featuring paradoxical
statements, among other devices, the poem paints the picture of the problems a
stammerer faces.
The hidden part of her candidly talks about the struggle of an impotent man
in intercourse, thoroughly describing the privates of a lady and making use of
imagery, rhetoric, similes and metaphors.
Woman’s Chapters describes the phases of a woman’s physical and mental development from
adolescence to adulthood. This poem richly employs rhyme, imagery and pun,
which make it very humorous.
On the whole, Heavy Tongue is an inspiring collection.
However, the image of the tongue on the cover of the book seems unnecessary, as
it can affect the maturity of the work. Besides, the description of sexual
organs in The Hidden Part appears to
be too overt.
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* Courtesy,
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ReplyDeleteToo much of everything is bad
Money is everything
So is too much of money bad?
You have all the money
5. You have all the honey
You are a paper that smells
And make men to smile
A light paper that makes men heavy
When they have bundles
10. You are a rectangle
That makes men to rest at all angles
A paper with a seal
That men steal with zeal
Money makes a man first
15. And his opinions seconded
A paper that makes men right
Even when they are wrong
Money has no mouth
Yet it speaks your language
20. You have money
You have money
The affluent feel insecure
A disease difficult to cure
Running helter-skelter
25. From their shelter
At the slighted short
It is not whether you have money
It is whether you don’t have mourning
Because you have money…
Background/Setting of the poem
Because the poet Andrew Oiwona is a Nigerian, one can
conclude that this poem is all about the situation of things
in his homestead – Nigeria. There is no misgiving that
money dictates the tune in Nigeria. Money seems to be a
little god that people worship. It is in Nigeria that people
worship, adore and are passionate about money and
riches. They pay homage to anyone who is living in
affluence not minding how he/she came across such a
wealth. It is against this that poet presents his poem –
money:
Money makes a man first
And his opinions seconded
Summary/Analysis
Lines 1-5
The poet draws the curtain of his poem by presenting his
thoughts on people’s notions on money. According to
average men on the street, money is everything. “He who
says money cannot buy your joy does not know where to
shop for it”, says a notable writer. With this in mind, the
poet persona concludes that anyone who is rich or
wealthy possesses all goodies of life:
You have all the money
You have all the honey
“Honey” here means joy, happiness, pleasure and
gladness.
Lines 6-9
Here the poet persona is showering encomium on money.
He describes money as a paper that smells yet it makes
people smile, happy, cheerful and delighted. He further
portrays money as a light printed paper that makes owners
to feel heavy, important, pompous, arrogant and self-
important.
Lines 10-13
Another description of money the poet persona made is
that it is a rectangular shape item which men possess and
makes them control all the angles – worldwide. He ends it
that money is a worldly item that all and sundry are eager
to possess even to the level of taking more than what they
need:
A paper with a seal
That men steal with zeal
Lines 14-17
Here, the poet persona describes money as an item that
brings men to the forefront and upper in the societal
ladder even if such a person lacks intellect, brain power
and mental power. He further clarifies that according to
the societal judgement of money, money makes owners to
be right at all times even when he/she is wrong and guilty:
A paper that makes men right
Even when they are more wrong
Lines 18-26
The poem speaker here describes money as a
phenomenon that has no mouth, but speaks all languages.
What he is driving at here is that money is the
determining factors world over. In line 22, he makes it
clearer that zeal to acquire riches is what makes all and
sundry to feel insecure, hence they are running helter-
skelter, struggling and crossing hurdles and toiling to
amass wealth. This and others may be what that great
philosopher, Sophocles had in mind when she said:
“There’s nothing in the world so demoralizing as money”.
Lines 27-29
These last three lines conclude the entire poem. The
portion of the poem could mean what Voltaire, a Greek
writer meant when he said: “Don’t think money does
everything or you are going to end up doing everything
for money”. To cut it short, it is not money that matters
but peace of mind. Hence the poet speaker says:
It is not whether you have money
It is whether you don’t have mourning
God bless you for taking the time to write this.
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3) the ryhme scheme
Here's Nightfall with the analysis:
ReplyDeleteNight is not like daytime
When the sun rises
Night falls
Night is not like day that is hot
Night is nippy
And makes man sleepy
Night is not like the day that is bright
Night is dull
And cannot read and write
Night is not like the day when people work
Night is when people sleep to wake
Night is not the time for loud lullaby
Night is the time for lull
Night is not like the day
That is pure and holy
Night is diabolic
And makes friends fiends
Night is not like the day
When people wake as if they will die
Night is when people sleep
As if they were dead
Night is not when people pursue dreams
Night is when people dream dreams
Night is not when people gather
Night is when we dark weather
Night alias dusk
Like the wind blows with dusts
To cover the eyes of men
So they cannot see
As night falls
We all fall
Asleep
Making sleep the order of the day...
BACKGROUND/SUMMARY OF THE POEM
This poem "Nightfall" could be seen from two different angles. One, this could be a poem of contrast between daytime and night time, hours of daylight and that of night. Two, it could also be seen as a comparison between a period men are strong, agile and active with that of a period when they are old, aged and finally transited to death. Whatever may be the case, there is a daytime as well as night time. There is a wide gap between these two movements in time. The activities in these two periods are also not the same.
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